Frank, I really like response #3. It is well supported with examples. The 4th response is a bit too plotty. Hope you liked (and finished) the book.
Roberto - 3/5 Responses
Roberto, your 2nd response is plot summary, and your third starts off that way even though it veers into character traits. If you're having a hard time coming up with a topic, go to the list of questions I provided.
Aaron - 2/5 Responses
You posted the same response twice. Aaron, I need you to get on the ball. The one real response you wrote was a simple plot summary. I need you to go deeper.
Billy - 5/5 Responses
Nice responses. You say that you wish there were more action. What more are you looking for?
Pat - 2/5 Responses
Pat...I need you to do better. You only finished 40% of the required work. I need better. What happened to The Things They Carried?
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